If you've ever been working on a story, and wanted a more original way to show (rather than tell) your character's emotions, The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer's Guide toCharacter Expression by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi is the book for you! It's full of gestures and physical, mental and internal cues that give the reader an idea of what your character is going through. The book covers 75 emotions, from Amusement to Worry.
Here are a few of the cues listed
under "curiosity":
- Repeating a statement as a question
- Leaning in, sliding a chair closer
- A small, delighted smile
- A shift from mediocre conversation to pointed questions
Not only that, but their blog, theBookshelf Muse has a (FREE) Thesaurus for Weather and Earthly
Pnenomena, Colors, Textures and Shapes, Character Traits and Settings
and even Symbolsim. These should probably be books in their own
right! Scroll down their page on the right side the Thesaurus links.
You'll find entries like:
- Drought
- Prejudice
- Elevator
- Pride
- Gritty
Here's a partial sample of the entries
for "Hurricane/Typhoon
Touch: the house shivering
and trembling as winds buffet it, rain pelting and pouring through
holes in the roof or broken windows, steadily warming air as the
power and a/c go off
(There are entries for other senses
such as sight and smell.)
and then a section on:
Mood: There's nothing quite
like being enclosed in a boarded-up house that's being pummeled by
100mph winds. This situation quickly becomes claustrophobic,
especially in the heat of summer when the power goes out. Hurricanes
create an atmosphere of fear and worry as people sit in the dark and
wonder how bad it's going to get. The mood becomes very tense and
oppressive very quickly.
The authors also cover symbolism,
possible cliches, and other notes to consider in using that weather
phenomena (or character trait, setting, etc) in your writing.
Be sure to check the Emotion Thesaurus, you might:
- Do a victory dance
- Give a slow smile
- Hug yourself
- Look over your manuscript and make it better!
Thank you so much for taking the time to review The Emotion Thesaurus (and the other resources at The Bookshelf Muse). Our hope in creating this book was to help writers better convey their characters' emotions. Hopefully we've achieved that. Thanks again!
ReplyDeleteHappy to, Becca! The more writers who know about your book...lol the fewer of us will be bald. :) Fantastic work, both of you.
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